All of us want to live in luxury, can get anything that we want, go to any anywhere and do anything that we can with our money. My mom always said “Study until smart, and then you can be rich” So it’s all begin with study, go to class, sit for the exam and etc. But nowadays, to only go to class is already so hard because there’s some class that I dislike. The reasons why I detest some class are because the bad lecturer, bad timing and bad environment.
Firstly, is the lecturer. There’s some lecturer that came in the class, start to talk and explain (although we don’t understand anything) and then gave us lots of exercises. This is what we called BORING! The lecturer supposed to give us short break because our brain can’t concentrate along the class for 2 hours. When there’s short break, we can release our tension and get some fresh air. Moreover, the lecturer doesn’t have sense of humour. Humour is quite important to get students attention from daydreaming and making noise. The lecturer may tell some jokes or short stories to make us more relax in the class. Furthermore, the lecturer is always late. If the class start at 8 a.m., he or she will come at 8.15 a.m. or 8.30 a.m. If it’s because something that really important, we don’t care but how about it happens for many times? How can we don’t care anymore? It makes us feel disrespect and make us lose our mood.
Other than that is bad timing. Example like class early in the morning (8-10 a.m.) and night class (8-10 p.m.). When the class start too early, most of the students will come late because they oversleep (well, it can’t be denied that it’s the best time to sleep). Plus, when it’s too early, student didn’t manage to eat breakfast. Therefore they will come in the class with empty stomach, makes them can’t concentrate and just wasting their time in the class. Now about the night class, that also dislike by students. It’s all because in night, students usually busy with club activities and meetings. They also prefer to do revision and homework at night. Moreover, it’s also dangerous for the students to walk to the class at night especially girls and students that live far from here. In addition, students also dislike consecutive classes. There are some students that have to attend class from 8 a.m. until 1 p.m. It will tired them, and probably they already lose concentration when it’s just 10 a.m. All of this really dislike by the students.
Next, is the bad environment. Of course to study well, the environment must also in well condition. But some classes have bad air-conditioners. It didn’t function well, thus make the class smells bad. It will be hard for the students to study in smelly class. But it also can’t be too cold in the morning. When this happens, students can’t concentrate because they have to warm their body and some of them will just continue to sleep. Then, some classes also have bad lighting. There are lights that will turn off for a while and there are also lights that didn’t function at all. Students will have hard time to see the slideshow, the board and even the lecturer. Furthermore, the size of the class also is one of the reasons. When the class is small but students are too many, we have to squeeze in along the class for 2 hours. It really not comfortable, makes us can’t concentrate plus if the chairs are broken.
As the conclusion, generally, students will detest the class that have bad environment, bad timing and bad lecturer. If this keep going on, it won’t be good for the university or the school, especially the students. Hope this matter will be solve to make sure the class will be comfortable enough for full of spirited students and thus increase the number of successful students in future.
Dearest Naim,
ReplyDeleteThanks :) Good structure and examples given :)Good thesis statement and topic sentences are crystal clear :)
Haha you mentioned that the students must warm their body if they have classes in the morning? They are not cars or machines ^^ just say they are still sleepy and are not fully awake :P and if the chairs are broken, you can't even sit on it...maybe you should just say the chairs are uncomfortable and uneven :)
Good job :) continue writing and slowly improve on your choice of words to make the ideas even clearer and accurate :) and since we have done subject verb agreement in class, next time when you edit your own essay, do watch out for those errors too ya ^^
All de best :)
Luv,
Ms Jasline